This is a beautiful little piece and certainly very different from the one
other track I have of yours. :-) I like the composition as such, the
But I think you didn't do your voice good. Too much bass/treble emphesis. It
sounds like this EQ-setup or perhaps it's part of an IR is much better suited
for a bass.
The bass - especially after 1:min44-45s seems to be very loud, when it gets
too high. When the first note happened directly after the end of your vocals,
I thought it was you singing "mh".
One last thing, that doesn't sit well with my ears is the drum kit. It
sounds a bit too low. Although if the toms really sound like, what I heard,
then I can understand, that you moved them back that far. Still due to the
soft drums, your voice, that sounds like it is coming from the wrong kind of -
probably - good speakers and the bass mostly being nice and decent, the piano
takes over too much.
Another thing it did like, was the background choir at the end. And if I
didn't mention it, the vocals themselves are very good. I didn't notice, where
you used zita-at1. I have a suspicion for one note and one only and even
there, I'm happy to accept that my ears are playing a trick on me. :-)
Good bit of music, pitty, you didn't do something like that earlier.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes
Music was my first love and it will be my last (John Miles)
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